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Reto Black Hat 1:
YouTube:  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wo9lSeMMbVI FaceBook: https://www.facebook.com/InmortalMoral/videos/vl.104660060318155/283582412296422/ Extras: 1.La primera escena, vemos al jefecito de lejos y luego de cerca. Siendo esto referencia a los videos de terror, en que una sombra que está lejos, termina acercándose. Me recuerda al corto de terror, luces fuera. Enlace en la descripción. 2.Por manejar un muñeco de ventrículo, se cree, que es referencia a Jisaw, el que dice empiece el juego.   3.El juego se llama Capturar a la bruja, que es una referencia a la bruja de Blair, o simplemente una bruja más. 4.Con el uso que le dan a esa cámara, es referencia a las películas de terror que son grabaciones, y así fue la película la bruja de Blair.  5.Según, Alan Ituriel, en su cuenta de tuitter, esto es una referencia al meme. Sinceramente, ni yo me di cuenta. Tal vez, le dio gracia y le dio re tuet. 6.Cuando demencia rompe ramas, puede ser referencia a la…

Mangas yaoi: Gorgeous Carat Galaxy, Romantic Joutou, Mother's Spirit

Mother's Spirit 



Does history lengthen?

The story has a good idea: exchange student, who goes to Japan and assigns a single assistant to guide him. This sounds good, in addition to adding that he knows nothing of language and is of a tribe in which he does not use technology, that is separated from the world and his race may end up in danger of disappearing.
The impact of the natural to the world today, is a good idea, but the way it is, is not very good at all, but that does not make you miss the interesting story, other than that makes it graceful. But that happens sideways when it is said that your tribe is intelligent and that you can learn fast, but do you learn a language in a week? This seems impossible, unless you have already begun to study the language before, and that is a detail that is not mentioned, which makes you think that the tribe is really very intelligent and that learns fast (detail that the author did ).

As a point to mention, it is the romance that takes place between the protagonists, it does not seem an attraction at first, it seems rather a relation between master pupil or that of father and son. The man who is settled is over 25 years old, while the student is under 20, for a moment, one of the protagonists is concerned about the idea of ​​an adult with a minor, a subject that could be used better, unfortunately it was not so , Only makes it look like a concern of one of the protagonists. If you like to read romance stories between adults and college students, well, this story is for you.
A major problem in the story, is the end, when the end is believed to have come, think that at least tube a good ending that makes it feel like a good story but one realizes that it is not the end. Unfortunately, to get to the true ending, it feels like you just extended the story unnecessarily, making the real ending not look as good as you'd expect, preferring the previous scene as the ending.
For this story, I can say that lengthening it would not be a bad idea, if you take into account the following topics:
  • One: The younger adult relationship, take that part of the story and make it more serious. Which would make the story more mature and adult.
  • Two: If they try to improve the romance between the protagonists, it is that they look as if they were father and son, or student and teacher. Once you see them like this, seeing them as a couple is impossible or at least difficult.
  • Three: The foreign student is the son of the chief of the tribe, that their relationship was easily accepted, makes the story feel loose. Being the son of the chief of the tribe, he should have seen some opposition.
If a story is lengthened, it is an opportunity to improve it, explain what has already been said, go deeper into the topics discussed, but there is a danger that it will carry a lot of plot and be desperate.
As the story went, it looked like a casado emptied that can be filled, stayed like a beta version of a main idea. An idea that is not bad at all.
Final Punctuation: 70 out of 100.
If it had not lengthened or if they wanted to lengthen it could make it more realistic, would have been better.

                                                    Romantic Joutou

Incomplete history? Good story?

The story is interesting, but on the part of the universe it describes (Omegaverse). It does not give full explanation of this world of humans, beta, omega and alpha. Taking into account that the alpha are the only ones that can impregnate the omega and that these expire hormones that drive the alphas crazy, the discrimination that people have towards the omegas ... among many factors that can be explained and make more interesting the history.

The story is confusing, but the social rules if they are to discuss. It is a Mpreg of passable history but only you will finish reading it to know in which ends.

Personally, it was difficult for me to read it, taking into account that the universe in which it is situated is interesting and omitting that of Mpreg. If you like universes well explained, this story is not recommended. But you can go through forums, since this universe is the Omegaverse you can find another one that is better.

Punctuation: 70-100.

To pass the time is well, since the development of the characters is well done.


  Gorgeous Carat Galaxy.


 Good story?

It is a story that does not focus on the relationship of the protagonists, but although the story is cataloged as Sweet Yaoi, does not seem to be and leaves many beginnings that makes clear that there is something between them, but easily mistaken as friendship between friends , It depends on who reads it. The story, shows us little of the protagonists, but it gives to understand part of the past of these that has to do with the history, so that, although they do not say much, it does not bother for the reading.

The mystery that is presented, is interesting, causing you not to stop reading until the end.

It is recommended if you like the good sex-free plot.


10-10

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