Mangas Yaoi: Corazón Silencioso, ¿otro enfoque? (Spanish-English) - Inmortal Moral

Resumen

Un hombre cuyo corazón no late (literal), pero cuando encuentra a una persona este empieza a latir. Y la trama corre al rededor del protagonista y quien hace latir su corazón.

Critica

Diseño

Los personajes esta bien diseñados, un estilo de manga, pero a diferencia de otros mangas yaoi, aquí no vemos extremidades más grandes(largos) de lo normal. Así que los personajes están bien.

Un punto a criticar es la ausencia fondo, muchos de los cuadros de este manga parecen personas pero no fondos, en algunos puntos esta bien, pero en la gran mayoría puede ser molesto para algunos, incluso cuando un personaje esta sentado (un caso), la imagen se nota que no hay fondo, pero tampoco la silla. El personaje esta sentado en el aire.

Pero todo esto no afecta la historia en si, pero puede disgustar algunas personas. Para mi puede llegar a ser molesto en algunos casos, pero la historia es interesante que ese detalle se olvida...

Trama del manga

La historia es algo sencilla, pero tiene un punto de vista diferente: En lugar de una típica historia de amor a primera vista, se inventaron una enfermedad de una persona cuyo corazón no late (literal) pero no muere, hasta el día que conoce a una persona. Esto es obviamente una alegoría al amor de primera vista, con esa persona especial que hace que el corazón late con fuerza. Aún que en este manga trata de enfocarse en esa enfermedad y la relación que tiene con esa persona que hace que su corazón late. Así que esa persona especial empieza a relacionarse con el enfermo, sin olvidar las personas al rededor de estas.

Así que es una historia de amor de primera vista, pero con un enfoque diferente: Una enfermedad que hace que el corazón no late, pero literal y no es un zombie, sin olvidar como se comportan el resto

Al final le doy como clasificación final: 95-100.
La ausencia de fondo es algo que molesta, pero no afecta la historia, incluso es interesante que hace olvidar la ausencia de fondo y todos esos espacios vacíos.

Summary

A man whose heart does not beat (literal), but when it finds a person this begins to bark. And the plot runs around the protagonist and who makes his heart beat.

Review

Design

The characters are well designed, a manga style, but unlike other yaoi sleeves, here we do not see larger (longer) limbs than normal. So the characters are fine.

One point to criticize is the absence background, many of the pictures in this manga seem people but not backgrounds, in some points this is fine, but in the great majority affects, even when a character is seated (a case), the image is noted That there is no bottom, but neither the chair. The character is sitting in the air.

But all this does not affect the story itself.

Manga plot

The story is somewhat simple, but it has a different point of view: Instead of a typical love story at first sight, they invented a disease of a person whose heart does not beat (literal) but does not die, until the day he knows a person. This is obviously an allegory of love at first sight, with that special person who makes the heart beats with force. Even though in this manga he tries to focus on that illness and the relationship he has with that person who makes his heart beat. So that special person begins to relate to the patient ...

So it's a love story at first sight, but with a different approach: A disease that makes the heart not beating, but literal and not a zombie ...

In the end I give it as final classification: 95-100.
The absence of background is something that bothers, but does not affect the story, even is interesting that makes forget the absence of background and all those empty spaces.

Mangas Yaoi: Yuigon, Ikumen After2 , 50 x 50, Second Life VYO

Yuigon 

Typical teenage story?

It's a manga, about the lives of two high school students and their traumas of the past. At first they are presented as simple students, one is an average guy and the other a problematic. They discover that they have more in common and one conceals their feelings, making the end beautiful, something simple, but beautiful.

Although it may be thought to be a cliché story, one notices that it deviates from that point and the story changes to a different one than one thinks. Although they seem to sum up a larger story, it is a good summary that is complete story by itself, because they speak of the past and is more than enough to understand the story and do not feel lengthened.

Warnings: Contains shotacon (major with minor).   Final score: 95 -100.

 Ikumen After2   

Realistic?

The story is: Single parents know each other because their children are friends in kindergarten.

A good start in a love story.

Simple characters, simple story, entertaining, very normal and realistic in most points. As a cliché you can say that one of the protagonists falls in love at first sight is something already too used (at least for me), but leaving that aside is a very good story.

The story itself, only shows the protagonists, a little of their life before history ate (manga) and the people around them. Topics that tried that did not need to be extended, they showed enough to make the story nice, of course, those who read the manga, may want to know more, but that would already extend the story and although it may seem good, Drama, it would feel loaded and slow, with slow I mean desperate (since by some subject treated, social service agents could come). Sometimes, it is better to leave the stories as they are and that is enough.

In the part of the cliché in which one of the protagonists falls in love at first sight, is very used or at least for me to see something like that. It would have been better if a normal romance had been given, from a friendship created by the friendship of the children, which interest would have been given when they began to coexist at a certain point. But as mentioned before, it is only one point, but the rest is good.

This story, despite having that point previously mentioned.

Final Score: 100 out of 100.

It's realistic, interesting and it's one of these stories that, if you are someone who really likes high sexual content and you hope to find it, you just do not mind not finding it, or it is not explicit. Just good story. 

50 x 50

Dangers with alcohol?

The plot introduces us to two male characters, one has fetish for the legs and the other for the breasts. The plot shows a cycle that can be seen and repeated:

•  Your girlfriends vote for them.
•  They drink too much."
• They do not remember anything the next day.

  Both characters feel a certain binge, but their rivalry does not leave them. It's a story, interesting, funny, there are even parts where it detects a double standard and is funny, along with the part that apparently the protagonists have their female versions, as they meet two other women, who apparently spend it Same as them. A story, entertaining and that teaches that: If you get drunk, discover your gay side. Although that is not surprising, it simply entertains.

It is advisable to read and see, if you like that contains little sexual content, as it is recommended for you. If you like funny situations. Because this manga is for you.

The final score is: 100 out of 100.

Second Life VYO

Is there something wrong?

The story presents us when one of the protagonists messes with the wife of the boss's son. It is a good story, the characters and their past, in addition to the abuse of the stepbrothers (because a protagonist is the lover's son), making him take advantage of his position of power to annoy the other protagonist, but as they have known since The principle, can do no such thing.

The feelings are noticed when one of the protagonists does not bother him, this is because they knew each other in the past, but only one remembers and the other does not.

The plot is simple but entertaining, although it seems slow, we present several facets of one of the protagonists and the other notice. When it all ends, the story goes on, but explaining insignificant details that make the story entertaining and do not feel that the story is lengthened, making the true ending is acceptable.

Final score is: 90 out of 100.

Mangas yaoi: Gorgeous Carat Galaxy, Romantic Joutou, Mother's Spirit

Mother's Spirit 

Does history lengthen?

The story has a good idea: exchange student, who goes to Japan and assigns a single assistant to guide him. This sounds good, in addition to adding that he knows nothing of language and is of a tribe in which he does not use technology, that is separated from the world and his race may end up in danger of disappearing.

The impact of the natural to the world today, is a good idea, but the way it is, is not very good at all, but that does not make you miss the interesting story, other than that makes it graceful. But that happens sideways when it is said that your tribe is intelligent and that you can learn fast, but do you learn a language in a week? This seems impossible, unless you have already begun to study the language before, and that is a detail that is not mentioned, which makes you think that the tribe is really very intelligent and that learns fast (detail that the author did ).

As a point to mention, it is the romance that takes place between the protagonists, it does not seem an attraction at first, it seems rather a relation between master pupil or that of father and son. The man who is settled is over 25 years old, while the student is under 20, for a moment, one of the protagonists is concerned about the idea of ​​an adult with a minor, a subject that could be used better, unfortunately it was not so , Only makes it look like a concern of one of the protagonists. If you like to read romance stories between adults and college students, well, this story is for you.

A major problem in the story, is the end, when the end is believed to have come, think that at least tube a good ending that makes it feel like a good story but one realizes that it is not the end. Unfortunately, to get to the true ending, it feels like you just extended the story unnecessarily, making the real ending not look as good as you'd expect, preferring the previous scene as the ending.
For this story, I can say that lengthening it would not be a bad idea, if you take into account the following topics:

• One: The younger adult relationship, take that part of the story and make it more serious. Which would make the story more mature and adult.
• Two: If they try to improve the romance between the protagonists, it is that they look as if they were father and son, or student and teacher. Once you see them like this, seeing them as a couple is impossible or at least difficult.
• Three: The foreign student is the son of the chief of the tribe, that their relationship was easily accepted, makes the story feel loose. Being the son of the chief of the tribe, he should have seen some opposition.

If a story is lengthened, it is an opportunity to improve it, explain what has already been said, go deeper into the topics discussed, but there is a danger that it will carry a lot of plot and be desperate.
As the story went, it looked like a casado emptied that can be filled, stayed like a beta version of a main idea. An idea that is not bad at all.
Final Punctuation: 70 out of 100.
If it had not lengthened or if they wanted to lengthen it could make it more realistic, would have been better.

                                                    Romantic Joutou

Incomplete history? Good story?

The story is interesting, but on the part of the universe it describes (Omegaverse). It does not give full explanation of this world of humans, beta, omega and alpha. Taking into account that the alpha are the only ones that can impregnate the omega and that these expire hormones that drive the alphas crazy, the discrimination that people have towards the omegas ... among many factors that can be explained and make more interesting the history.

The story is confusing, but the social rules if they are to discuss. It is a Mpreg of passable history but only you will finish reading it to know in which ends.

Personally, it was difficult for me to read it, taking into account that the universe in which it is situated is interesting and omitting that of Mpreg. If you like universes well explained, this story is not recommended. But you can go through forums, since this universe is the Omegaverse you can find another one that is better.

Punctuation: 70-100.

To pass the time is well, since the development of the characters is well done.

  Gorgeous Carat Galaxy.

 Good story?

It is a story that does not focus on the relationship of the protagonists, but although the story is cataloged as Sweet Yaoi, does not seem to be and leaves many beginnings that makes clear that there is something between them, but easily mistaken as friendship between friends , It depends on who reads it. The story, shows us little of the protagonists, but it gives to understand part of the past of these that has to do with the history, so that, although they do not say much, it does not bother for the reading.

The mystery that is presented, is interesting, causing you not to stop reading until the end.

It is recommended if you like the good sex-free plot.


10-10

Mangas yaoi: Black sun. Good story? - Inmortal Moral

It is interesting the plot, but the truth walks with each other hollow. Like the past of the protagonists, and a touch of stockholm syndrome. It is a good story despite this gap, and although the relationship of the protagonists is confusing, I think it is the stockholm syndrome that gets to mislead the reader. It is well-made story, but it is confusing when you feel attraction, or when you feel abused. It is difficult to see when he stops feeling violated by a loved one. On the part of the seme, saw someone who thinks differently, who sacrifices for others, this makes him feel attracted. With hollow I mean, apparently the protagonists knew each other, but they do not go deep into that, making a hole.

Despite that, the story is passable, wanting to read it to the end, which is not very predictable.

 90 - 100

Mangas yaoi: Second Life VYO ¿Hay algo malo? -Inmortal Moral

Second Life VYO

Es un manga del genero yaoi
La historia nos presenta cuando uno de los protagonistas se mete con la esposa del hijo del jefe.  Es una buena historia, los personajes y su pasado, además del abuso de los hermanastros (debido a que un protagonista es hijo del amante), haciendo que éste se aproveche de su puesto de poder para molestar al otro protagonista, pero como se conocen desde el principio, no puede hacer tal cosa.

Los sentimiento se notan cuando a uno de los protagonistas no le molesta, esto es debido a que se conocían en el pasado, pero solamente uno lo recuerda y el otro no.

La trama es simple, pero entretenida,  a pesar que parece lento, nos presentan varias facetas de uno de los protagonistas y el otro lo nota. Cuando lo todo termina, la historia sigue, pero explicando detalles insignificantes, que hacen a la historia entretenida y no se siente que la historia se alarga, haciendo que el verdadero final sea aceptable.

Puntuacion final es: 90 de 100.  

Mangas yaoi: 50 x 50 ¿Peligros con el alcohol? -Inmortal Moral

50 x 50

La trama nos presenta a dos personajes masculinos, uno tiene fetiche por las piernas y el otro por los pechos.  La trama muestra un ciclo que se nota y se repite:

-Sus novias los votan.

-Toman demasiado.

-No recuerdan nada al día siguiente.

 Ambos personajes sienten cierta atracón, pero su rivalidad no los deja. Es una historia, interesante, graciosa, incluso hay partes dónde se detecta una doble moral y es gracioso, junto con la parte que al parecer, los protagonistas tienen sus versiones femeninas, ya que se encuentran con otras dos mujeres, que al parecer pasan lo mismo que ellos. Una historia, entretenida y que enseña que: Si te emborrachas, descubres tu lado gay. Aunque eso es nada sorprendente, simplemente, entretiene.  

Es recomendable de leer y ver, si te gusta que contenga poco contenido sexual, pues es recomendable para ti. Si te gusta las situaciones graciosas. pues este manga es para ti.

Mi calificación final es: 10 de 10. 

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Mangas yaoi: Do S Obake ga nekasete kure nai, ¿fantasmas sexuales? -Inmortal Moral

Do S Obake ga nekasete kure nai

La historia es  sencilla, un hombre gay que se enamoro de otro, pero éste se va a casar con una mujer, o sea es un hombre heterosexual.  Debido a que es un insatisfecho sexual, lo visita un fantasma sexual o depravado,

La historia es un amor  no correspondido, pero le falta historia, ¿de dónde viene ese fantasma? ¿Cual es su historia? Al menos que sea un manga sin terminar, le doy calificación baja, ya que le puede seguir con más capítulos y extender la historia, esto lo que necesita a diferencia de otras historias que alargarse es bueno. 

Calificación: 30 de 100.

Mangas yaoi: Ore no Ushiro ni Tatsu na. ¿Buena historia?¿Fuera del cliché? ¿Difícil de leer? -Inmortal Moral

Ore no Ushiro ni Tatsu na

No parece tan típica como uno puede pensar por la imagen que presenta el manga. Hay dos historias distintas, una no tiene que ver nada con la otra, pero lo que tienen en común: El que uno piensa que es uke, es el seme, y el que se piensa que es el seme es el uke. Una inversa de roles, y hay a quien le gusta. Si te gusta los roles fuera del cliché, ésta es tu historia.

La primea historia es sencilla, explicando como el termino amor para uno  de los protagonista es aprendido de manera errónea y piensa que abuso es una muestra de amor. El pasado de los protagonistas solo explica una parte de la historia, lo suficiente. La historia contiene un alto contenido sexual, asi que si te gusta el acto contenido sexual, esta historia es para ti.

La historia presentada es algo apresurada, y pudo dar para más capítulos. a igual que la segunda. La segunda historia presentada a diferencia de la primera, es más puro porno.

La calificación final a la primera historia es: 6 de 100. Ya que pudo explotar más la historia, ya que todo los que nos presenta puede dar para más.

La calificación final a la segunda historia es: 1 de 100.  Si la primera historia parecía algo apresurada, esta lo es más.

Si te gusta el alto contenido sexual y una historia simple, pues éste manga es lo tuyo,  porque de lo contrario sería difícil de leer.

Mangas yaoi: Sol negro. ¿Buena historia? -Inmortal Moral

Sol Negro

Es Interesante la trama, pero la verdad anda con uno que otro hueco.  Como el pasado de los protagonistas, y un toque de síndrome de estocolmo. Es buena historia a pesar de ese hueco, y aunque es confuso la relación de los protagonistas, creo que es el síndrome de estocolmo lo que llega a despistar al lector. Es historia bien hecha, pero es confuso cuando siente atracción, o  cuando se siente abusado. Es difícil ver cuando deja de sentirse violado por amado. Por parte del seme, vio a alguien que  piensa diferente, que se sacrifica por los demás, esto hace que se sienta atraído.  Con hueco me refiero, al parecer los protagonistas se conocían, pero no profundizan en eso, haciendo así un hueco.

A pesar de eso, la historia es pasable, queriendo leerlo hasta el final, que no es muy predecible.

Le doy un 90 de 100.